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Nishiki Showa Makes a Splash!

Posted: Tue Mar 30, 2021 9:19 pm
by Nishiki Showa
1. Are you 18 or older? We want to know if anyone is under 18 years of age. Being under 18 will not bar you from participating in our community. Rather, this will allow us to gauge who is acting inappropriately toward minors.

Yes, I am of age.

2. Do you have past experience with collaborative writing or roleplay, and if so, roughly how much? You can be brief. This is intended to help us provide useful feedback in your approval.

I have some experience with forum and small group roleplays, but not for very long in either one. I'd say roughly two years' worth altogether, give or take. I'm looking forward to extensive stories with everyone here!

3. You may include an optional (SHORT!) Roleplay sample for people to read that gives a feel for your character in writing.

This was it. The big leagues. More so than any gallery or museum she'd every been to before. The critics and press weren't here, but the sharks were swimming all the same looking for the faintest whiff of crimson dollops to swarm. Was she nervous? HA! She'd tell it straight and she'd tell it true! Of course she was nervous! Every fiber from the tri-tone tips of her head to the shimmering scales on her back were positively tingling as she clopped her way across the cobblestone steps into the next chapter of her future. Who wouldn't feel a rush of emotion facing a new era head-on!? Ok, time to regroup and recenter. Zen. Nothing but still waters. What better way to make a splash than with waters unbothered? After all, this was the start of her time, her era, the Showa Era! Yaaaaa! Beacon wouldn't know what hit them! They'd caught a whopper for this big pond and she was going to show just how big she was!

Re: Nishiki Showa Makes a Splash!

Posted: Tue Mar 30, 2021 10:29 pm
by Bartok Evergreen
I don't like fish people.

Except this one, she's cool and I was thinking the entire time that her weapon better be paint related. Wonderful. Cool way to turn her from artist to Huntress, and tie her in with the larger world. I like it. Bartok and her probably knew eachother at Signal, at least of eachother.

I vote yes.

Re: Nishiki Showa Makes a Splash!

Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2021 1:51 am
by Ax L Rose
My vote is yes. I have provided a more thorough feedback over PMs. :)

Re: Nishiki Showa Makes a Splash!

Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2021 5:24 am
by Nishiki Showa
Appreciate the feedback! I've made changes, so hopefully they address what you brought up.

Re: Nishiki Showa Makes a Splash!

Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2021 1:29 pm
by Vlithra Qing Long
My vote is an absolute yes.

I love her design and her backstory even more. There is something about her journey from Artist to Beacon Student that is interesting, thrilling and at the same time fun to read. It really makes you look forward to how she develops during her time at Beacon. Her weapons and fighting style also mix very well and her semblance is unique with many different applications that are just fitting to her character.

I honestly can't wait for this energetic little koi to eventually become a dragon.

Re: Nishiki Showa Makes a Splash!

Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2021 10:20 am
by Castor Achromos
i'm gonna go with a yes, can't think of any obvious problems and everything seems pretty good.
but just giving a warning ahead expect a lot of fish based puns and insults, from a certain color blind bastard.

Re: Nishiki Showa Makes a Splash!

Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2021 9:54 pm
by Al Ciendra
Aaaaaah I finally read through this BEAUTIFUL profile!

I love her, not much else to say!
I think her and Al could get along great and I'm looking forward to see you write her!

So yeah, all the yes!