Leonard Uaine

A collection of the previously approved/denied character's applications complete with feedback posts for future reference.
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Does Lennie's profile meet with your approval?

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Total votes: 3
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Leonard Uaine
Posts: 64
Joined: Mon Dec 21, 2020 12:06 pm
Age: 20
Gender Identity: Male
Race: Faunus (Snapping Turtle mouth)
Aura Color: Viridian
Occupation: Frosh
Semblance Name: Intransient Steps
Weapon Name: Fisticufflets

Leonard is twenty; I am older than he.

I've got plenty of rp experience (here and elsewhere)!
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Bastion Sandstone
Posts: 110
Joined: Sat Dec 12, 2020 11:45 pm
Age: 19
Gender Identity: Male
Race: Human
Aura Color: Sandy-tan
Occupation:
Semblance Name: True Grit
Weapon Name: Diplomacy

Some pretty rad potential, though with so much pending I can't say yay or nay. Look foward to what this guy will become.
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Al Ciendra
Posts: 398
Joined: Tue Feb 02, 2021 5:13 am
Age: 18
Gender Identity: Female
Race: Faunus (Wolf-Ears and Fangs)
Aura Color: Orange
Occupation: Beacon Student
Semblance Name: Volcanic Heart
Weapon Name: Arcum and Gladio

I'm with Bastion on this, I like the concept you have laid out, but this BIO is lacking in a lot of detail, and it's hard to get a good picture of this character.
So I'm holding my vote until he gets developed a bit further.
No need to add a semblance either, I do like the surprise factor of having it manifest mid-roleplay.
Al chatters in #FF5500
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Ax L Rose
Posts: 282
Joined: Sat Feb 06, 2021 2:27 pm
Age: 23
Gender Identity: Female
Race: Faunus - Major Mitchell's Cockatoo - Feathers
Aura Color: Electric Blue
Occupation: Huntress
Semblance Name: Harmonize
Weapon Name: Electra Heart + Rebel Yell

I like this concept. I vote yes. Honestly I like that his profile is pretty lightweight so far. It's pretty easy to read and I feel like you get a pretty decent idea of what the character is like even though not every detail is explicitly spelled out.
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SheidelII
Posts: 54
Joined: Sat Dec 12, 2020 10:47 pm
Age: 0
Gender Identity: Male
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There's a good feel for the kind of character you're going for so far. You've given yourself a good base to use. Looking forward to the completed profile!

For a Semblance name, maybe "White Knuckle"? Being a boxer, Leonard Uaine is very fist-oriented, and white knuckle is a term to describe tensing your hands into fists. Its kind of like making something solid and rigid, like what you have for his Semblance description.
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Al Ciendra
Posts: 398
Joined: Tue Feb 02, 2021 5:13 am
Age: 18
Gender Identity: Female
Race: Faunus (Wolf-Ears and Fangs)
Aura Color: Orange
Occupation: Beacon Student
Semblance Name: Volcanic Heart
Weapon Name: Arcum and Gladio

Well after the changes and additions Lennie gets a yes from me.
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Myron Hyles
Posts: 81
Joined: Sun Dec 13, 2020 4:58 am
Age: 18
Gender Identity: Male
Race: Human
Aura Color: Turquoise
Occupation: Student
Semblance Name: Sleeping Spell
Weapon Name: 40 Winks

I like this character as a whole. I'm partial to longer profiles like always, but you have a hand with shorter ones (idk if this is complete yet).

The fact that he's a hotheaded (giant) turtle faunus is hilarious.

You may want to correct his Aura color, since it appears on every post (you meant viridian, right?).

Anyway, that's a Yes.
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Leonard Uaine
Posts: 64
Joined: Mon Dec 21, 2020 12:06 pm
Age: 20
Gender Identity: Male
Race: Faunus (Snapping Turtle mouth)
Aura Color: Viridian
Occupation: Frosh
Semblance Name: Intransient Steps
Weapon Name: Fisticufflets

Veridian/Viridian is actually another one of those grey/gray things, but I'll switch to the more common spelling. :3
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Myron Hyles
Posts: 81
Joined: Sun Dec 13, 2020 4:58 am
Age: 18
Gender Identity: Male
Race: Human
Aura Color: Turquoise
Occupation: Student
Semblance Name: Sleeping Spell
Weapon Name: 40 Winks

No, my mistake, I just couldn't find the color online.
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