Jericho Galley

A collection of the previously approved/denied character's applications complete with feedback posts for future reference.
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Approval?

Yes
5
50%
No
0
No votes
Silverhand
4
40%
Silverman
1
10%
 
Total votes: 10
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Jericho Galley
Posts: 105
Joined: Mon Feb 15, 2021 12:09 am
Age: 22
Gender Identity: Male
Race: Human
Aura Color: Sea Green
Occupation:
Semblance Name: Helping Hand
Weapon Name: Drunken Sailors

1: Yes, older than 18.
2: Lots of experience with roleplay and this site.

3: Roleplay Samble

"John! Johnny! Johnny Silverhand!" Jericho was late to responding to that name and he jerked awake in his seat. "Yes?" He asked, sitting up straight. He had fallen asleep in class and as he glanced around everyone else had their books out and open. Where was his again? And when did they even take them out? They were just watching a film and he had just rested his eyes for a moment...

"Please don't fall asleep while we're reading, Mr. Silverhand." The teacher shook his head and asked Jericho to read the next passage. Jericho frantically began looking through his bag that hung on the back of his seat but couldn't find it. A classmate of his pushed their book to him and with a grateful nod, he read the passage.

It was filled with some long words that he didn't quite understand, and his reading was slightly slower than the average student, but he got through it. The teacher raised their eyebrow. "I remember reading in your records, Mr. Silverhand, that your teachers in Mystral said you were a fantastic reader. And never fell asleep in class." He added.

Jericho swallowed. "Well, the weather is having an effect on me sleeping at night, cap- er, sir! And my head is a little foggy right after waking up." He scratched the back of his head, embarrassed and hoping his lies worked.

The teacher chewed on something for a moment. "Quite. Alright, Mrs. Rose, could you read the next pass-" The teacher continued on and Jericho fished in his bag until he found the book and opened up to the correct page, using only his right hand to so.

A whole year later and he still was having a tough time with all of this. The classroom, at least. Out there on the ground he was fine, but in here... He wasn't cut out for it. But he couldn't leave. Not if he didn't want to get caught and burned from the inside out. They would be looking for him, and here was the safest place for him.
Last edited by Jericho Galley on Sat Feb 20, 2021 9:56 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Myron Hyles
Posts: 81
Joined: Sun Dec 13, 2020 4:58 am
Age: 18
Gender Identity: Male
Race: Human
Aura Color: Turquoise
Occupation: Student
Semblance Name: Sleeping Spell
Weapon Name: 40 Winks

Lots of freshmen sleeping in class this year...
I really like the concept as a whole, and I have to approve of the name "Drunken Sailors".

Just for clarification, his Semblance is similar to Vine's from the show, right ? (except it's longer and can phase through things)

However, you really should add a longer personality description. I realized after reading his profile that I just slapped Claude's (guy from the art) personality on Jericho without thinking, because I don't know anything about his behavior. I'm voting No for now because of this.
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Jericho Galley
Posts: 105
Joined: Mon Feb 15, 2021 12:09 am
Age: 22
Gender Identity: Male
Race: Human
Aura Color: Sea Green
Occupation:
Semblance Name: Helping Hand
Weapon Name: Drunken Sailors

Myron Hyles wrote:
Tue Feb 16, 2021 8:37 pm
Lots of freshmen sleeping in class this year...
I really like the concept as a whole, and I have to approve of the name "Drunken Sailors".

Just for clarification, his Semblance is similar to Vine's from the show, right ? (except it's longer and can phase through things)

However, you really should add a longer personality description. I realized after reading his profile that I just slapped Claude's (guy from the art) personality on Jericho without thinking, because I don't know anything about his behavior. I'm voting No for now because of this.
Technically a third year, not a freshman. Maybe I can make that a bit more obvious.

I guess it is, though I didn't base it off of Vine. There is no visible connection between the Hand and Jericho, and couldn't lift boulders or anything like that.

I have no idea who Claude is, the picture just fit too dang well with how I pictured Jericho. I added more to the personality, I knew it was a bit lacking.
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Myron Hyles
Posts: 81
Joined: Sun Dec 13, 2020 4:58 am
Age: 18
Gender Identity: Male
Race: Human
Aura Color: Turquoise
Occupation: Student
Semblance Name: Sleeping Spell
Weapon Name: 40 Winks

Alright, this looks better, and I'm changing my vote.

There's no visible connection, but there is some sort of link, right ? From what I understand, he can pull himself using this ethereal hand.

Claude is from Fire Emblem : Three Houses (from which Honeydew's art comes too)
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Jericho Galley
Posts: 105
Joined: Mon Feb 15, 2021 12:09 am
Age: 22
Gender Identity: Male
Race: Human
Aura Color: Sea Green
Occupation:
Semblance Name: Helping Hand
Weapon Name: Drunken Sailors

Yes there is a link and he can pull himself, but there is not stretchy aura arm or anything, just a flaoting hand. If sommeone had some sort of "Aura Vision" or something, then they could see a link, but normal eyes don't see anything.
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Kailyn Keison
Posts: 177
Joined: Thu Dec 17, 2020 8:57 am
Age: 19
Gender Identity: Female
Race: Faunus (Crotalinae) - Pit Organs (internal)
Aura Color: Black
Occupation:
Semblance Name: Gravitas
Weapon Name: Daii Shonnara and The Fingers

Oh, I'm ALL OVER this. This is an interesting take on the "student with a serious personal problem" archetype.

Yes yes yes.
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Carmine Crest
Posts: 53
Joined: Tue Dec 22, 2020 3:48 am
Age: 17
Gender Identity: Male
Race: Human
Aura Color: Gray
Occupation:
Semblance Name: Crisis Control
Weapon Name: Cadel and Maria

Honestly love the idea of a pirate attending Beacon but the fact you turned it into a pirate hiding in Beacon by posing as Johnny Silverhand just make this idea that much better, I'll be voting yes.
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Al Ciendra
Posts: 398
Joined: Tue Feb 02, 2021 5:13 am
Age: 18
Gender Identity: Female
Race: Faunus (Wolf-Ears and Fangs)
Aura Color: Orange
Occupation: Beacon Student
Semblance Name: Volcanic Heart
Weapon Name: Arcum and Gladio

All the yes, not just because of the accidental Cyberpunk reference but just because I think Jericho as a character is super interesting and there are so many ways he could be played.
Plus his semblance is also very interesting and seems 'handy' to have.
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Ax L Rose
Posts: 282
Joined: Sat Feb 06, 2021 2:27 pm
Age: 23
Gender Identity: Female
Race: Faunus - Major Mitchell's Cockatoo - Feathers
Aura Color: Electric Blue
Occupation: Huntress
Semblance Name: Harmonize
Weapon Name: Electra Heart + Rebel Yell

I particularly like this character's semblance. I kept imagining Johnny Silverman/hand as Keanu Reeves.

I was going to post more thorough feedback, but I got lazy. Hopefully a yes will prove satisfactory anyway.
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Maria Ravenheart
Posts: 28
Joined: Wed Feb 03, 2021 10:11 am
Age: 19
Gender Identity: Female
Race: Human
Aura Color: Red
Occupation:
Semblance Name: Red Lightning
Weapon Name: Fatalis

I am going to vote a Yes, seeing that the character is very well developed.

With that said, I do want to address how easy it was for Jericho to assume Johnny, the huntsman in training's name and identity without being caught by Beacon's officials. If Silverman/hand is an established Huntsman in training, I would assume he have a profile and picture taken, and that staff would have been able to tell someone faking identity.

I'll abstain my Yes vote until the plot hole is ironed out.
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Jericho Galley
Posts: 105
Joined: Mon Feb 15, 2021 12:09 am
Age: 22
Gender Identity: Male
Race: Human
Aura Color: Sea Green
Occupation:
Semblance Name: Helping Hand
Weapon Name: Drunken Sailors

Maria Ravenheart wrote:
Fri Feb 19, 2021 5:31 pm
With that said, I do want to address how easy it was for Jericho to assume Johnny, the huntsman in training's name and identity without being caught by Beacon's officials. If Silverman/hand is an established Huntsman in training, I would assume he have a profile and picture taken, and that staff would have been able to tell someone faking identity.
Ah! I had forgotten to put that in! Expect that to be edited pronto. Like, right now. Should be fixed and hopefully to your liking.
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Maria Ravenheart
Posts: 28
Joined: Wed Feb 03, 2021 10:11 am
Age: 19
Gender Identity: Female
Race: Human
Aura Color: Red
Occupation:
Semblance Name: Red Lightning
Weapon Name: Fatalis

Jericho Galley wrote:
Sat Feb 20, 2021 8:19 am
Maria Ravenheart wrote:
Fri Feb 19, 2021 5:31 pm
With that said, I do want to address how easy it was for Jericho to assume Johnny, the huntsman in training's name and identity without being caught by Beacon's officials. If Silverman/hand is an established Huntsman in training, I would assume he have a profile and picture taken, and that staff would have been able to tell someone faking identity.
Ah! I had forgotten to put that in! Expect that to be edited pronto. Like, right now. Should be fixed and hopefully to your liking.
Then it's a yes from me ^^
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