Merle Richards

A collection of the previously approved/denied character's applications complete with feedback posts for future reference.
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Merle Richards
Posts: 3
Joined: Sun Dec 27, 2020 10:08 am
Age: 20
Gender Identity: Male
Race: Human
Aura Color: Light brown
Occupation:
Semblance Name: Insight
Weapon Name: Maltese Falcon

1. Are you 18 or older? We want to know if anyone is under 18 years of age. Being under 18 will not bar you from participating in our community. Rather, this will allow us to gauge who is acting inappropriately toward minors.

That I am!

2. Do you have past experience with collaborative writing or roleplay, and if so, roughly how much? You can be brief. This is intended to help us provide useful feedback in your approval.

Plenty of! I'd reckon about four years, roughly, some of those having been on 'the old place' for those that it's relevant to ^^;;
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Kailyn Keison
Posts: 177
Joined: Thu Dec 17, 2020 8:57 am
Age: 19
Gender Identity: Female
Race: Faunus (Crotalinae) - Pit Organs (internal)
Aura Color: Black
Occupation:
Semblance Name: Gravitas
Weapon Name: Daii Shonnara and The Fingers

That's an incredibly detailed weapon image! You've got my 'yes'.
Kailyn's speech color is 99ff00.
Her theme song is a banger.
You can find EPs for all my characters here.
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Bastion Sandstone
Posts: 110
Joined: Sat Dec 12, 2020 11:45 pm
Age: 19
Gender Identity: Male
Race: Human
Aura Color: Sandy-tan
Occupation:
Semblance Name: True Grit
Weapon Name: Diplomacy

I gotta say yes, I like the detective theme. Have you read the Dresden Files book series? I would highly reccomend. Private Eye Wizard in modern day Chicago. Anyway, yes.
Bastion tries to keep the peace in FFBF00
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Merle Richards
Posts: 3
Joined: Sun Dec 27, 2020 10:08 am
Age: 20
Gender Identity: Male
Race: Human
Aura Color: Light brown
Occupation:
Semblance Name: Insight
Weapon Name: Maltese Falcon

I actually haven't! Though I'd prolly consider it, haha
SheidelII
Posts: 54
Joined: Sat Dec 12, 2020 10:47 pm
Age: 0
Gender Identity: Male
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Merle Richards could use some more mechanics explained about his Semblance, Insight. Specifically how much Aura using it costs him. Maybe something about the distance covered by those "shadows" using more Aura the farther it goes or how many possibilities it can cover. That kind of stuff.

Everything else seems to be in order.
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Merle Richards
Posts: 3
Joined: Sun Dec 27, 2020 10:08 am
Age: 20
Gender Identity: Male
Race: Human
Aura Color: Light brown
Occupation:
Semblance Name: Insight
Weapon Name: Maltese Falcon

Fair enough ^^;;
The general basis I that I went with when thinking it over is generally a small initial cost, with it working incrementally as it's used. And as far as things go, it was pretty much a singular (mostly accurate) possibility per shadow instance. So rather than multiples, it's just a single case per person/entity and the like.
I'll make sure to clarify things in any case.
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Carmine Crest
Posts: 53
Joined: Tue Dec 22, 2020 3:48 am
Age: 17
Gender Identity: Male
Race: Human
Aura Color: Gray
Occupation:
Semblance Name: Crisis Control
Weapon Name: Cadel and Maria

A private investigator will be an interesting person to have among the cast of character we have managed to gather so far and without any obvious flaw that pops out to me, I can safely say this is a yes and I look forward to seeing him in action!
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Myron Hyles
Posts: 81
Joined: Sun Dec 13, 2020 4:58 am
Age: 18
Gender Identity: Male
Race: Human
Aura Color: Turquoise
Occupation: Student
Semblance Name: Sleeping Spell
Weapon Name: 40 Winks

A detective kind of character is original and cool, intelligence always seem to come second next to diving headfirst in trouble for Huntsmen. Plus he's well described overall.
I definitely say Yes.
*Drawls in #82E6E6*

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