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Claire Buíocán

Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2023 3:42 am
by Claire Buíocán
Lookout, it's me again.

Claire's an Antagonist character, though she is decidedly not villainous.

Re: Claire Buíocán

Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2023 4:47 am
by Professor W B Copperfield
A powerful and tricky Semblance for an Antagonist, and I also like how you added(from the last time I looked) Aura costs for the basic uses, like a greater cost for the larger the physical exertion. This allows her to do some fairly great things, but always with some limit down the road.

Also looks like she fills the Antagonist criteria to me by all aspects.

Yes.

Re: Claire Buíocán

Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2023 6:33 pm
by Forrest Waldstein
Claire is an incredibly fascinating character. She has a really interesting Semblance that is fueled by the minds of other people for better or worse. I cannot wait to see what she'll get up to.

So, it's no surprise that I can only give Claire an emphatic, resounding yes.

Re: Claire Buíocán

Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2023 5:37 am
by Al Ciendra
Claire is a great character, a matron to the lost and someone working to establish equality for all is surely someone to be admired.
I don't really get whats antagonistic about her?
I guess she pulls some shady underground deals?
No idea.
Regardless, it's fine as is, just s bit confused.

On the topic of her semblance, I really likethe idea, the power to turn your opponents worries into reality is great and opens up some fun rp.
And while it makes perfect sense for her to draw on her semblance to give her some passive buffs by spreading rumors.
I think her semblance should be toned down, especially the bit about her temporarily disabling someones semblance, it's cool to have a swiss army knife, but you brought a swiss army armory.

Perhaps limit her to being able to draw on a few effects at once, give them a timelimit after which they need to be refreshed or increase the amount of aura this powerful of semblance would cost.

Right now I'm going to abstain from voting because of this.

Re: Claire Buíocán

Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2023 6:25 am
by Professor Honeydew Monarch
Sorry for any wait you've had to deal with! J'approved. Happy Hunting.