Ax L Rose 2: Electric Boogaloo

A collection of the previously approved/denied character's applications complete with feedback posts for future reference.
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Ax.

Yes.
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VERY yes.
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Idk bro.
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Total votes: 3
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Ax L Rose
Posts: 282
Joined: Sat Feb 06, 2021 2:27 pm
Age: 23
Gender Identity: Female
Race: Faunus - Major Mitchell's Cockatoo - Feathers
Aura Color: Electric Blue
Occupation: Huntress
Semblance Name: Harmonize
Weapon Name: Electra Heart + Rebel Yell

Age: 31

Past Experience: 15+ years in games, tabletops, forums, MMOs.

RP Sample: search.php?author_id=3574&sr=posts

OOC: I've reworked the character a little bit, since my writing skills have matured a little since I last did this, but she's still mostly the same. Some old scenes she was involved in are no longer appropriate for this continuity of my character, though others can probably stay. As a result of the changes, I thought it was kind of an unfair circumventing of this community's approval system to simply bring her back like she hasn't changed, when she actually has changed.

This version of Ax is notable for being a graduate of Beacon. This is mostly my explanation for where Ax has been all this time, and why some characters might recognize or remember her, if they choose to.

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Fuchsia Iris Ükhel
Posts: 92
Joined: Sun Dec 13, 2020 12:10 am
Age: 22
Gender Identity: Female
Race: Faunus (Black Cat, ears and tail)
Aura Color: Purple and pink
Occupation: Student - Final year
Semblance Name: Witch Way
Weapon Name: Orchid

Given I was following along as you revamped/recreated this profile, I'll throw my two cents in. (And my yes vote)

Obviously I am completely biased, and I love Ax. However, I know her pretty intricately by now and can say that her profile has all the hallmarks of a working Huntress. Motivation for joining an Academy, a will to protect/help people, and a drive to have accomplished a lot at Beacon and eventually graduated.

The changes to her Semblance are welcome, of course, because the addition of the 'beat' makes it easier to understand exactly why it allows her to do the things it does, such as synchronizing her allies nearby so they can coordinate attacks more easily.

I also enjoy the inclusion of the Rebel Yell here, because a super hyped up shotgun death machine is always a great thing for a Huntress to have.

I'm also interested to eventually learn what happened to team PANC. A curious mystery. We shall see what the future holds.
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We used to watch the butterflies / Floating among the raindrops
But time will worry us into the dirt
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Lios Cecilio
Posts: 9
Joined: Mon Jul 26, 2021 7:17 pm
Age: 19
Gender Identity: Female
Race: Faunus (Cat Ears and Tail)
Aura Color: Gray with a Dark Red hue
Occupation: Huntress-In-Training
Semblance Name: Mea Umbra
Weapon Name: Riko

Shoves the yes button as much as possible.

I think this is the first time I've actually gotten to properly read Ax's profile so I can't actually JUDGE it as a Revamp and more only judge it on what I read on its own merits, which is to say I enjoyed it a great deal! So Obviously it gets a yes from my end of things. :D
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Al Ciendra
Posts: 398
Joined: Tue Feb 02, 2021 5:13 am
Age: 18
Gender Identity: Female
Race: Faunus (Wolf-Ears and Fangs)
Aura Color: Orange
Occupation: Beacon Student
Semblance Name: Volcanic Heart
Weapon Name: Arcum and Gladio

Loving the newly updated Ax!

Especially her evolved semblance, it was really cool before, but it felt just a bit limited in its usability when it came to combat, but now it still has the cool emotion reading aspect and a very interesting application for combat, seeing as this would allow Ax to coordinate herself with anyone that lets her do so.

I'm happy to see Ax join us again, rock on!
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Professor Wednesday Haptasnytrir
Posts: 78
Joined: Fri Jul 23, 2021 11:04 pm
Age: 39
Gender Identity: Female*
Race: Human
Aura Color: Grey
Occupation: Professor, Huntress
Semblance Name: Hliðskjálf
Weapon Name: Gungnir and Valföðr

With that, Ax has been approved for roleplay! This thread will now be moved to the Approval Archives.

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